Washington Square Park Poem by Lee Crowell

Washington Square Park

Rating: 5.0


we sat in Washington Square Park
on a slatted wood bench in the sun
your hair was tied back
and your face flushed pink with little beads of sweat
I stared at your breasts
while you peeled a grapefruit
and we spit the seeds into your paper bag

we walked back to the studio on sixth avenue
it was time for your class
and I had to catch a bus
we kissed for the first time
and when I turned to leave I could have cried
for that moment which would never be repeated
it's the damnedest thing how they never repeat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lily Law 27 March 2009

Well penned.. No one can escape from Love... ^-^

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C.R. Clark 26 March 2009

A good write indeed, Lee. It's very true, every event in life is unique and not to be repeated. There may be many similar ones but, never another like the original. Best wishes Richard

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Sally Plumb 25 March 2009

Brilliant, you big softie.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 24 March 2009

Expressed your feelings well.

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Chelsi Ruffing 23 March 2009

I think you did a very good job on this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Lee Crowell 03 July 2009

I pray that Denis's poem is hugely successful, and that he'll send me a little gift for providing the inspiration. (or a big one if he gets rich) Seriously Denis, congratulations with your upcoming success. How can we obtain a copy of the publication?

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Denis Martindale 03 July 2009

I wrote a piece of poetry based on Lee's poem. My poem, First Kiss Blues, was added here on poemhunter.com then /poem/ then first-kiss-blues/ and has recently been accepted for publication here in the UK. Thanks, Lee.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 May 2009

I've read this yet again.I love it.

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Salu Salu 23 April 2009

great! ! highly magnetical writing........good mems are to be cherished for ever. so it repeatedly haunt with more power.. rgrds/salu

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Sebastine Humaemo 31 March 2009

hmmm soo cute..........much true.....all do cross such incdnt n life....10+++ sebastine

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