Waves Of Loneliness Poem by Sandra Feldman

Waves Of Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


Down by
The Ocean magic,
Where dreams have learned
To fly,
I remember you
And softly
Start to cry.

The bitter saltiness
Of my tears
Joins the Ocean's
Vastness,
As I try
To come back
To a life
So empty,
It's not even
Worth, the try...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2022

Beautiful poem with a wonderful and captivating title. Every word woven in this poem is a wave of loneliness that creates a void in the chamber of our heart. So deeply touching and poignant.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2022

Every line of this poem stands out. To my Poem List.

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Jayne Louise Davies 23 November 2022

A beautiful write Sandra x Loved every word x

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M. Asim Nehal 24 November 2022

Profound poem. Nicely written.5***

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 November 2022

Very sad poem, the saddest I have not read before, tears are rolling down my cheeks, very sad but it has greatest Beauty, entwined in touching words.5 Stars TOP Score or even myriad more. Thank YOU for sharing, my dear friend Sandra. WAVES of LONELINESS, great poem

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D.N. Rebb 23 November 2022

If only there were more than 5 stars to give. I had to read this poem twice; as the tears blurred my vision. What a sad yet beautiful set of words.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 November 2022

Sandra a wonderful write TFS

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David Wood 23 November 2022

Softly and gently you speak for all those who have lost in love.

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