whithin the universe
we are a nation
within the nation
we are a religion
...
Read full text
fundamentally true and you have reflected truthfulness....... thanks for yur sharing.
Brilliant write Samanyan with a very subtle play on words.... Thanks for this one
A very clever and witty play on words, samanyan, which you through your poetic skill made into a delightful poem. Though quite brief, your poem says a lot and I enjoyed reading it very much. Carl.
uhum, , , so, , , see the cycle? ....everything has its cycle, , , like planets, they have their own orbits, , , A very fantastic piece, , FANTASTIC, , , naizz
very true...this is very impressive Sam... a universal write... words to open our eyes to the truth... a great thoughts towards peace... really a great share.. keep on writing.. 10+++
Separation is and always will be an illusion - - a very sound poem and well presented - - - - we are all truly as you say, but we have forgotten who and what we are - - - thanks for helping us to remember......... a 10 from Fay..
fundamentally, we must become human with in ourselves...good write...very meaningful
The chain of existence revolve around, reality speaks in this piece...10
Another basic truth revealed. I must now consider you the philosopher - poet of Poemhunter. Congratulations! May you have many readers and followers. GW62
As above so below and everything in the universe is inter-related....a ten...nice and clear....
Indeed we cannot escape from the Universe!