Thursday, March 5, 2009

We Are The Universe Comments

Rating: 3.7

whithin the universe
we are a nation
within the nation
we are a religion
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Ramesh T A 18 May 2009

Indeed we cannot escape from the Universe!

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rago rago 08 April 2009

fundamentally true and you have reflected truthfulness....... thanks for yur sharing.

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Sandra Martyres 06 April 2009

Brilliant write Samanyan with a very subtle play on words.... Thanks for this one

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Carl Harris 01 April 2009

A very clever and witty play on words, samanyan, which you through your poetic skill made into a delightful poem. Though quite brief, your poem says a lot and I enjoyed reading it very much. Carl.

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Naidz Ladia 30 March 2009

uhum, , , so, , , see the cycle? ....everything has its cycle, , , like planets, they have their own orbits, , , A very fantastic piece, , FANTASTIC, , , naizz

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 March 2009

'We are the universe' is well defined in this poem.

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 March 2009

very true...this is very impressive Sam... a universal write... words to open our eyes to the truth... a great thoughts towards peace... really a great share.. keep on writing.. 10+++

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Fay Slimm 17 March 2009

Separation is and always will be an illusion - - a very sound poem and well presented - - - - we are all truly as you say, but we have forgotten who and what we are - - - thanks for helping us to remember......... a 10 from Fay..

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Indira Renganathan 10 March 2009

Within Sl so much...you'll soon become international..10

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Kesav Easwaran 08 March 2009

fundamentally, we must become human with in ourselves...good write...very meaningful

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Catrina Heart 06 March 2009

The chain of existence revolve around, reality speaks in this piece...10

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 March 2009

Another basic truth revealed. I must now consider you the philosopher - poet of Poemhunter. Congratulations! May you have many readers and followers. GW62

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As above so below and everything in the universe is inter-related....a ten...nice and clear....

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