Listen baby
you will never lose me
even if i die tommrow
you will never lose me ..
ill be there when your lonely
& never leave you in the dark
ill tell you that i love you
i can't see this fall apart..
i miss you
& I'm sorry that i mistreat you
your like a angel
flying over me
& I'm like the guy with the pistol..
I'm sorry when i made you cry
i never should of lied..
i know this sound like the same song
but i just want you to take me back
so we can really go far..
sorry...
party girl is sitting next to me, , , she said its cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! so if you find the time check her out......Poet 'party Girl' she is foxy.... Peace
easy flowing poem, from a simple heart.written well, keep it up.
I have read over many of your poems today, steven, and I enjoy your simplicity of structure. This poem is my favourite. Good use of contrast with a sincere and loving tone. Thanks for sharing.
The Girl Part; Part One (= i Lay on My Bed And Wonder Why, Whats The Reason For My Cry, is It a Plead? To Make me Stop And Think Before i Bleed. or is It Cause i think of All the Words You Said, The ones i Wish Weren't in My Head. otherwise it Just Might Be That Soon You'll Stop Loving Me... Now; i Don't Want To Loose You, i Just Want Your Words To be True So Make Me Believe They Are; & Maybe We Can Go Far. Thankyou So Much (=
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The construction of the sentences is so well and the words used could have convinced any girl you used to love.Good job bro!