We had a body
we had a mind
we had a choice
we had our chance
but we didn't use any of it
Now we are but
a vessel upon this earth
carrying the souls
of what's to come
They will put right
what we did wrong
We had our chance
Well drafted, loved it, But, dear poet, automatically nothing will come, for well being everything we have to try, ....
Having chance of positive perspective in life is great. Having a mind of beautiful choice is definitely favorable for life. An excellent poem is well penned.10
Dave, such an inspiring poem..............................
Maybe we still have chance as long as we are alive and healthy, if I do not misread you! Heheheh!
They will put right what we did wrong ......so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem.
Our time has passed, time to make way for the next ones. But when was our time over? Great poem!
A thought provoking poem, how often we misuse our resources and then repent. Great write,10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Now we are but A vessel upon this earth Carrying the souls The ultimate truth has been revealed in simple yet most authentic manner. Great write. Thanks for sharing.10++