Dave Alan Walker

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We Had Our Chance - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

We had a body
we had a mind
we had a choice
we had our chance
but we didn't use any of it

Now we are but
a vessel upon this earth
carrying the souls
of what's to come

They will put right
what we did wrong

We had our chance

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death

Form: Free Verse


Comments about We Had Our Chance by Dave Alan Walker

  • Solomon SenxerSolomon Senxer (11/9/2018 3:30:00 AM)

    Maybe we still have chance as long as we are alive and healthy, if I do not misread you! Heheheh! (Report)Reply

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  • Dipti Deori BorahDipti Deori Borah (11/6/2018 4:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with nice feeling (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/30/2018 2:32:00 PM)

    They will put right
    what we did wrong ......so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem.
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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (10/29/2018 2:34:00 PM)

    Our time has passed, time to make way for the next ones. But when was our time over? Great poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/29/2018 3:56:00 AM)

    A thought provoking poem, how often we misuse our resources and then repent. Great write,10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (10/29/2018 12:41:00 AM)

    Dave, such an inspiring poem.............................. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/28/2018 4:35:00 PM)

    Having chance of positive perspective in life is great. Having a mind of beautiful choice is definitely favorable for life. An excellent poem is well penned.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (10/28/2018 2:39:00 PM)

    Well drafted, loved it,
    But, dear poet, automatically nothing will come, for well being everything we have to try, ....
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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (10/28/2018 12:03:00 PM)

    Now we are but
    A vessel upon this earth
    Carrying the souls
    The ultimate truth has been revealed in simple yet most authentic manner. Great write. Thanks for sharing.10++
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 28, 2018



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