When love turns to salt
Minds are defeated
When eyes begin to cry
Hearts get broken
When joy spits sorrow
When souls have gone
When a friend is lost
After tears, we learn
Music Head is right what we learn and the amount we learn is up to us... this is a great poem... very nice job. ~MC~
i really enjoyed reading this.. no matter what the tragedy, there is always a lesson to be learned. great write
We learn troughout our lives but still die as fools... This is a great poem. Short & straight to the point. Sometimes you only need a few words to express your feelings.10 from me
When I read this poem I think some personal loss inspired to write this good poem...since salt comes out and the pain can be expressed....... a master work in simple words............
i'm really touched by your words&how they r sad so sad, u know i, i learned from it sth. so, congratulations.
LEARN! that's the sense of life... even when all seems lose the sense.... great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thanks for suggesting this one.. i like it because you didnt use a bunch of big words for no reason. you didnt need big words. good job. i disagree with sherif. it ends perfectly. what we learn is up to us.