When love turns to salt
Minds are defeated
When eyes begin to cry
Hearts get broken
When joy spits sorrow
When souls have gone
When a friend is lost
After tears, we learn
Your poem contains a universal truth, but it's not clear to me only tear gives a proper learning.From my point of view sorrow can not prevail long and so we want to get rid of it.You know on the way of our life journey we lost a lot of near and dear ones, but like a new morning a new one comes and occupy the lost one-it's the rule of nature.your poem remembers me Thomas Hardy's pessimistic attitude.
We learn troughout our lives but still die as fools... This is a great poem. Short & straight to the point. Sometimes you only need a few words to express your feelings.10 from me
When I read this poem I think some personal loss inspired to write this good poem...since salt comes out and the pain can be expressed....... a master work in simple words............
i'm really touched by your words&how they r sad so sad, u know i, i learned from it sth. so, congratulations.
LEARN! that's the sense of life... even when all seems lose the sense.... great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem with lots of meaning and truth. I love it.