. We Learn Poem by Eyan Desir

. We Learn

Rating: 2.9


When love turns to salt
Minds are defeated
When eyes begin to cry
Hearts get broken
When joy spits sorrow
When souls have gone
When a friend is lost
After tears, we learn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyrsten Gaddis 11 June 2009

A poem with lots of meaning and truth. I love it.

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Prasetya Utama 11 June 2009

Meaningfull poem to learn.

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Sanjib Das 10 June 2009

Your poem contains a universal truth, but it's not clear to me only tear gives a proper learning.From my point of view sorrow can not prevail long and so we want to get rid of it.You know on the way of our life journey we lost a lot of near and dear ones, but like a new morning a new one comes and occupy the lost one-it's the rule of nature.your poem remembers me Thomas Hardy's pessimistic attitude.

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Wafae bazzi 10 June 2009

wonderful good poem i liked it

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Lexi Jackson 10 June 2009

very Deep &&: meaningful

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Triin Kann 05 July 2009

We learn troughout our lives but still die as fools... This is a great poem. Short & straight to the point. Sometimes you only need a few words to express your feelings.10 from me

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rago rago 05 July 2009

When I read this poem I think some personal loss inspired to write this good poem...since salt comes out and the pain can be expressed....... a master work in simple words............

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Zeinab Sherif 14 June 2009

i'm really touched by your words&how they r sad so sad, u know i, i learned from it sth. so, congratulations.

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Allan Macli Borges 12 June 2009

LEARN! that's the sense of life... even when all seems lose the sense.... great poem.

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Lynda Robson 12 June 2009

Good work Eyan, we never stop learning, 10 Lynda xx

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