What should I write tonight
The sky is clear, the moon is bright
I get a glimpse of you in the stars
So love should be the topic, not wars
The wind slowly weaves its path
Through the lanes in moonbeam bath
Will I reach you through words
Can my love be flying birds
What should I write tonight
You are far, I can't feel alright.
I get a glimpse of you in the stars So love should be the topic, not wars.... //.... Having fun could be so rewarding in the form of an amazing poem with a message plus an emotional feel. Thanks, Nosheen Irfan.
Can my love be flying birds What should I write tonight You are far, I can't feel alright........so touching and impressive. This poem of love and poetry is so attractive and it's composition is amusing one. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem. Full vote.
It seems that it doesn't matter what you write; you always do it well.
A marvelous poem on love beautifully crafted. Superb imagery and nice rhyme.10
Enjoyed this poem of beautifully rhyming verse..... having sunny images of love!
A sweet love poem. Enjoyed the flow and rhyme. 'Will I reach you through words Can my love be flying birds What should I write tonight You are far, I can't feel alright. '...is so nice.10+++
You certainly are having fun with the rhyme and with great images of love! A sweet poem.
This moonlight, this thing of dreams. within your writing a feeling came to me. Is this silent orb a reflection of ourselves Ominous over a midnight path or as a jewel to scatter light upon the waves as lovers stroll. The same moon that brings romance to one may seem as cold as eternity threatening madness with stark unrelenting reality to another. To choose to write of love for even one night reflects the power of the will.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I get a glimpse of you in the stars...... can my love be flying birds....... in moonbeam bath such wonderful poetic verses......... so full of poesy in your lines and in your mind dear Nosheen.. tony