What Should I Write Tonight? Poem by Nosheen Irfan

What Should I Write Tonight?

Rating: 5.0


What should I write tonight
The sky is clear, the moon is bright
I get a glimpse of you in the stars
So love should be the topic, not wars
The wind slowly weaves its path
Through the lanes in moonbeam bath
Will I reach you through words
Can my love be flying birds
What should I write tonight
You are far, I can't feel alright.

Thursday, August 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Having fun with rhyme.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2018

I get a glimpse of you in the stars...... can my love be flying birds....... in moonbeam bath such wonderful poetic verses......... so full of poesy in your lines and in your mind dear Nosheen.. tony

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2018

I get a glimpse of you in the stars So love should be the topic, not wars.... //.... Having fun could be so rewarding in the form of an amazing poem with a message plus an emotional feel. Thanks, Nosheen Irfan.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

Can my love be flying birds What should I write tonight You are far, I can't feel alright........so touching and impressive. This poem of love and poetry is so attractive and it's composition is amusing one. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem. Full vote.

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2018

It seems that it doesn't matter what you write; you always do it well.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2018

A marvelous poem on love beautifully crafted. Superb imagery and nice rhyme.10

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Bharati Nayak 27 September 2018

Awesome poem Nosheen Irfan. Love is rhyming here.

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Valsa George 02 September 2018

Enjoyed this poem of beautifully rhyming verse..... having sunny images of love!

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 September 2018

A sweet love poem. Enjoyed the flow and rhyme. 'Will I reach you through words Can my love be flying birds What should I write tonight You are far, I can't feel alright. '...is so nice.10+++

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Aqua Flower 30 August 2018

You certainly are having fun with the rhyme and with great images of love! A sweet poem.

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Edmund Strolis 30 August 2018

This moonlight, this thing of dreams. within your writing a feeling came to me. Is this silent orb a reflection of ourselves Ominous over a midnight path or as a jewel to scatter light upon the waves as lovers stroll. The same moon that brings romance to one may seem as cold as eternity threatening madness with stark unrelenting reality to another. To choose to write of love for even one night reflects the power of the will.

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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