What To Do About Remembering Poem by Susan Lacovara

What To Do About Remembering



Farm fresh brown eggs
rest in a bowl
near the pottery pitcher
holding coral tea roses

The house is kept quiet today
As I remember you

The white scalloped hem curtains
flutter with the passing breeze
my thoughts flirt with dialing a number
more than likely long ago disconnected

Too early to sleep and too late to make plans
I decide to cook elaborate recipes
just to pass hours
and ward off the temptation to reread your letters

I have rolled pretty beach towels
placed them in inviting baskets
just in case you care to visit the lake
there's old milk bottles full of clipped tulips
to lace my windowsills with simplistic beauty

All is set and settled
nothing of pretense here

(that is unless you count my pretending
you might be remembering me too)

Saturday, May 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: remember
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(05/14/18)How, still, these memories returns with the Spring.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 13 May 2018

This is a great Blues poem because the sadness is matched by the sweetness. My memory raced over the decades and I found parallel experiences that entered my mind refreshed by words and did not bring sadness but the awareness of a life replete with good things. Of course, I wish they had been better still vbut I too to will learn to rejoice in what good I did receive.

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Adrian Flett 13 May 2018

Hoping and anticipating with nostalgia and uncertainty. All so subtle said without any sentimentally. 'farm fresh brown eggs rest in a bowl'... so representative of potential life. A wonderful sense in your words. Adrian

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A very lovely poem beautifully crafted. A write embedded with memories that warms one' s heart. Very heartwarming.10

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Kelly Kurt 12 May 2018

Your description of your present was flawless. Enjoy memories, and your now.

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Daniel Brick 13 May 2018

This is a great Blues Poems

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2018

Remembering... it builds up tremendous atmosphere before it ends. A lovely poem

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

The words in the parenthesis are the best of all! Loved the title of the poem too.

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

Daydreaming is healthy particularly in poetry.+++10

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 July 2018

A beautiful poem on memory of the good days gone. Enjoyed from the first line to last. Thanks for sharing.10+++++

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Anthony Burkett 13 May 2018

Then there are no pretenses... remembering...

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