Ali Adamson

What To Say! - Poem by Ali Adamson

Where words are a veil
Sometimes, in relations
Silence is the deal

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about What To Say! by Ali Adamson

  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (12/29/2019 7:15:00 AM)

    Thoughts, words, and behaviour,
    in my language called: vichaar, vvani, and vartan...
    we have evil thoughts, many in fact but are still safe at least from the outside...
    we generally do not go as far as vartan/behaviour,
    but it is the speech/words/vaani that spoils things for us..

    What I could not quite convey still in these so many words,
    the poet has so briefly.
    well done dear poet.

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (12/27/2019 11:18:00 AM)

    In few words the poem says much- -A beautiful poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (12/24/2019 10:21:00 PM)

    If words are veiled between us
    The cover just as thin as a silk, smooth
    Though if the silence close our mouths
    It still failed to erase each others from our minds
    When our heartbeats already entwined

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (12/23/2019 11:19:00 PM)

    Profound and epigrammatic as always. Happy to have heard from you after a long time. Wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! (Report)Reply

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  • Anjandev Roy (12/23/2019 8:46:00 PM)

    Fantastic write. Thanks for sharing. anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Mj Lemon (12/18/2019 3:15:00 PM)

    So true, Ali. So true. When the words stop and we reflect on what has been said is precisely the time we come to terms with meaning. I find that during conversations I often make assumptions about intentions that are simply not there. This verse goes to myfavourites. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 16, 2019

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