When Alcohol Enters His Body Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
When Alcohol Enters His Body
By nature, he is very shy and friendly
His sturdy hands are always ready
To help anyone at anytime
A friend of everybody.
There are times when he is in a party
He cannot resist a bottle of whisky
At first he will join a toast with everybody
With a glass so tiny.
A couple of minutes, the whisky
Settled in his tummy
He would suddenly
Start to talk so loudly
And ask to have big glasses of whisky.
He went into overdrive
As the effect of whisky lingers overnight
He feels like a King
And acts like a King.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
This is very well crafted and carries a message too. As when alcohol enters, the person concerned loses his entity and in fact he is overpowered thus behaves like a being other than him......10
......acts like a king.....meaningful write.....thanks for sharing. anjandev roy.
He feels like a king and acts like a king' the effect of elixir Mam.
Liquor-crowned. Some men are like that. Interesting poem Rose. Five stars
This is the effect of liquor..... it boosts the beast out! A gentle man by nature when intoxicated under whisky acts in a manner totally different from his usual self. A silent man all of a sudden becomes loquacious...! A man who saves everyone in trouble forgets even to save himself and lays aside road rules and speed limit! Through your beautiful poem, you have proved how excess liquor is harmful to man.....! Five stars!
A great depiction of the transformation that too much drinking can cause.
The actions of a real drunkard are well recorded. Excellently observed, Mrs. Juan Austin. Extremely entertaining poem, which I have enjoyed very much. I see him now " appearing" again, your gorgeous words made that possible, great poetess. A 10 and much much more for the amazing poem and To My PoemsList
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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They say that alcohol makes one brave, letting the drunk do anything he wants even if it hurts other people because he is dominated by an intense feeling resulting to rage. Well crafted, ate Rose....10++