When Iam Thoughtless Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

When Iam Thoughtless

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When Iam thoughtless
A little voice stirs me
From the deep slumber
Of nothingness
Nudging me to think
Beyond this horizon
Where all the
Appropriate response
Is concealed in the
Vicinity of God.

© Aarzoo Mehek

When Iam Thoughtless
Monday, November 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,thoughtless,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 30 November 2020

Nice one. What then are your thoughts of what happens if you go to heaven. What you would expect. Its a retorical question. Dont answer.

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Nabakishore Dash 11 December 2021

Concealed in vicinity of God' nice and philosophical poem Aarzoo ji.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2020

Beyond the horizon of life! ! ! Inner voice in control. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2020

Dear Poetess Arzoo, I loved the flow of this beautiful poem. It is when the mind is emptied of thoughts, that we begin step into the realm of bliss - the vicinity of God. Fabulous philosophical journey from thoughts to thoughtlessness.......Top stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 December 2020

A well written poem....... Truly inspirational....5 stars *****

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Rajnish Manga 30 November 2020

The poem has a spiritual touch which underlines the importance of thoughtlessness while taking recourse to meditation which helps a person to reach the higher echelons of consciousness and attaining divine bliss. Thanks a lot.

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