When Innocence Is Crushed Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A well written poem.... Truly brilliant and poetic....5 stars*****

If we don't pick a flower, It grows for all to share But if we put it in a vase, It dies alone there. Your poem gives food for thought.

Beautiful bud is the insightful power of beautiful flower And insightful sense is the powerful wisdom of human The bud is ready to share its life of fragrance with all And insightful sense is ready to be a part of our peaceful life So, Do not allow the heart of love to sever the beautiful flower in exhibition its innocent beauty Do not allow the heart of love to hate others in spreading the fragrance of universal peace

a good metaphorical poem....

A poem full of powerful metaphors. Extremely well done. Thank you!

A beautiful poem.The life of the lovely bud, which was full of promise was cut short by a cruel hand.You truly said the hand was cruel and the motive was selfish! How many innocent buds are crushed with out feeling the soft sun rays!

Deep and insightful is this metaphoric rendition of yours. A beautiful creation written with clarity of thought.

I get hurt when flowers are plucked by people, specially from other's garden.Thus your poem is a very good message.

I was sad in the third stanza only because the connection of bud was severed selfishly.

a good message for the pluckers.