Who Am I Poem by Meggie Gultiano

Who Am I

Rating: 5.0


Who am i to judge a person
Casting the first stone
And physically harm and inflicting pain
Not feeling guilty, acting like an insane


Who am i, to be bitter
When all i have is love, not hatred and fear
Sheltered from the arms of my Creator
A small voice that deeply says..i am better


I was always humiliated
From dawn to dusk, tears i always shed
But i prayed to God to make me humble
And lead the way so i will not stumble...

Who am I.. just a little sheep..a servant of God

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

that humility..that simplicity...brings us very close to god

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Janell Cressman 05 April 2009

wow a strong and powerful poem! ! very well writen by an amzing poet! ! ! !

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Who are you? A talented poet who writes strong and meaningful poetry like this one, and I loved the rhyme too! 10 from me

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Fiona Davidson 12 April 2009

Wonderful strong write Meggie...10+++

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Ency Bearis 13 April 2009

Who are you? You are the smartest woman with this powerful write and strong message...that can carry one's heart or individual next to God.. Very powerful.......

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C. P. Sharma 16 May 2009

True submission in reverence....wonderfully pennened. I also have a poem in my collection 'Who am I'. You can read and review when you have time. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2009

a write much pleasing much soothing to read, Meggie...noble is the message you give inside...thanks...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 April 2009

The last line is very nice.

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Sandra Martyres 16 April 2009

Megg you are a great poet who can write simple yet very effective poetry...10+++

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Randy Hogan 15 April 2009

I love it.....such wise words......because we don't know any ones true heart, but God does....so my only judgement is to simple love.... The more Love you give the more you get back... So beautifully written 10+++++++++++++++++ God bless you always Randy

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