Who You Are Poem by Lyn Paul

Who You Are

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I want to be just who I am
Just me, no other
Who I am
Is Me
Not afraid to
Be Me
We all must stand up
Be just Who
Just who we are
Who you are
Do not hide
Who you are
We grow
We shine
We fall
We rise
Hope is there
For us all
Just as long
As we be
Just who
Just who we are
Just you
Just me

Be so proud of who you are




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Thursday, April 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,love,self
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 10 April 2014

The problem is that most people don't even know who they are or won't face or admit who and what they are.. I agree with you, be who you are, otherwise you only fool yourself mostly. Great poem. Very well said and set. S.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 April 2014

showcase the 'I' not hide it...great message.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2014

Everybody is unique. Feel great about yourself but without letting others down. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 12 April 2014

To be true to oneself is the only way forward, in a world that tries to put people into boxes of who they should be, we should embrace our uniqueness and accept ourselves as not perfect but human! ! Beautiful write Lyn! !

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Forged with the fantastic fingerprint of originally. Well done my friend!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2021

I like this kind of poetry that puts spotlight on self respect! ! Beautiful... beautifully written! !

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Yash Shinde 24 April 2014

I love and admire your originality greatly..................... We should change the world, but not necessarily transform ourselves from the roots........... I really feel that I know you since long, your poem have motivated me always, and this write of yours is packed with motivation and pride.................lovely write

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Amitava Sur 22 April 2014

Be very clear to self.Be bold in saying what you are and feel proud of yourself.... very true

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 April 2014

Very positive poem Lyn. Very true said, we should be proud of who we are. Unfortunately one realises it too late. Thank you Lyn for many Inspiring comments for my poems. I still believe telepathy exists.. I feel that I know you since long. I like your writings, as it brings much positivity in me. I believe much in words, as words are enough to make one strong at the same time it can crush one down too. I loved reading each lines...

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Dinesan Madathil 21 April 2014

Short lines Creeping downward Like veins of reality Spread into The minds near and far Well written Dear Lyn

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