Why Should Poem by Bharati Nayak

Why Should

Rating: 5.0


Why should I wear kajal
As only one of your admiring glance
can add sparkle to my eyes?
Why should I wear lipstic,
When the very thought of my love
Can add color to my lips?
O'Love! with your thought
My steps acquire spring
And my heart dances
With the sweet breeze.

Sunday, June 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written for a poetry challenge.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 23 June 2019

Dear Bharati, a poem that shows others' thoughts, and ours, are more effective than how we appear. Well penned.

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Bharati Nayak 23 June 2019

Thank you Jane Campion for your kind read and encouraging comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2019

O'Love! with your thought/My steps acquire spring/And my heart dances/With the sweet breeze.....captivating poetic expression! A befitting poem for poetry competition! A rapturous work....10

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Bharati Nayak 24 June 2019

Thank you Dillip for your lovely comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 June 2019

O'Love! with your thought My steps acquire spring And my heart dances With the sweet breeze. EXQUISITE THE LOVE WITHIN THE BREEZE WILL FOR EVER... GREATEST POET BN WITHIN YOU FREEZE

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2021

Why should I wear lipstic, When the very thought of my love Can add color to my lips? ............yes, natural beauty has no substitute! !

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

As a poet you have asked very important questions to all whom are dissatisfy with their natural beauty, it is so poignant and well penned poem, well done, full mark and onto my fav list

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

well done, hope to stay on the top list always 468 on top 500 poets Congratulations

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2020

Written for a poetry challenge, and the challenge was truly taken well. Why should I, need I say anything more?

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Queeny Gona 11 January 2020

Material things doesn't matter and can never stand before love. Beauty in thought and love at heart is apprehended! Enjoyed the read Ma'am!

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