anushmadhu P.Bharathi

' Will' Of Love - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Your name is home of love;
The porch greets
With Jasmine fragrance ;
My thirst is trapped within
A tender coconut tree;
Dreams are painted around the shelves
And freeze in ornate toys,
My taste possesses warmth
From the stove in the kitchen.
The darkness and loneliness
Shared not only in bed
But Counting the stars too.
I could touch the
Spilling water from the well.
Despite all,
The WILL of the house is
Not with me

In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Phazhani Bharathi

Comments about ' Will' Of Love by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • Louis Rams (2/13/2010 10:32:00 AM)

    the first line and the last two lines tell the story written, of a love found and a love lost.
    well written! thanks for sharing.
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  • (2/11/2010 8:12:00 AM)

    this is amazing! one of the best I've read yet! please enjoy my other poems as well! (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/30/2010 10:13:00 AM)

    i rated this one 10....... (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2010 11:02:00 PM)

    a delight of honest love conquer the heart of each beautiful to
    hold on, the glittering star that to love is a will to accept, the wisdom of
    uncertainties of life....God bless you my friend...a 10 +++++
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  • (1/10/2010 5:45:00 PM)

    very deep, I can feel some of the cultural difference's.. very well written... very warm (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2010 5:47:00 AM)

    I liked the theme of your poem but like all translations it loses something of the original (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2010 1:23:00 AM)

    It was an alright poem.

    I liked reading it but I am personally mor of a fan of longer readings.

    Hope you will take a look at what I have wrote as well.

    Keep writing

    'Let the poetry flow through the pen, as air through a soul'

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  • (1/3/2010 11:33:00 AM)

    I loved it and the way you described everthing around. <3<3<3< :) (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2010 11:30:00 AM)

    sensational! i like your way of expressing! very good! (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    Nice imagery! ! Nicely written (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    Nice imagery! ! Nicely written (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2009 1:59:00 AM)

    Good love poem. Smart, sweet, short, what it needed to be. (Report) Reply

  • Oyekake Satty (o. S.) Joshua (12/28/2009 2:37:00 PM)

    Ah Bharathi! !

    Simply exquisite! !
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  • (12/27/2009 10:53:00 PM)

    Very nice, subtle poem. I read with pleasure.
    Greetings :) Maria Barbara Korynt
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  • (12/27/2009 8:01:00 PM)

    Very well written. It is a very lonely poem searching for the real meaning of home. May you one day find the home of your dreams. (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 3:13:00 PM)

    talk about life in the form of poem
    I can see his poem his childhood
    and your memories...
    longing mother
    the presence of the wife
    some dreams...
    and loneliness

    katuu :)
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  • (12/22/2009 2:46:00 PM)

    I like the way you describe everything in your poem but it leaves me wanting the full story...a conclusion perhaps

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 1, 2011

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