Wish I! … Live In Your Heart Poem by saadat tahir

Wish I! … Live In Your Heart

Rating: 4.1


Wish I could, just live in your heart.
The human bit and the spiritual part.

In fearless daring, to touch your hair.
The pink cheeks and locks so fair.

To reach out fingers, to those jewels.
Deep blue! Star's and moon's fuels.

In an audacious flair to hold your hand.
And feel as free as the merry band.

With calloused hands, but tender touch.
Need not I fear, nor even a crutch.

With valor to wipe off, those pearly tears.
Snatch away, all your consuming fears

Gallantly tell, the world, all that I feel.
Boldly our love, with a kiss to seal.

With intrepid courage, pick u up.
From fount of youth, to greedily sup.

Audaciously to lay, my heart bare.
Hopelessly entangled in cupids snare.

In rash bravado, to hold u close.
Imbibe one from each, life's dose!

(Islamabad)
(Sep 27,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 09 November 2009

Romantic transcendance, Saadat...i suppose you are ready for a 'mythical Hanuman act'... Hanuman jumped past the ocean in mission as an envoy...here a lover fuelled by the force of love! Good work...thanks...10

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6000km sounds just so far away but you bridge gap with your love filled words. A romantic and heartfelt poem...

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Sonya Florentino 08 October 2009

enjoyed this bold proud love unhindered by distance...and jumping off the page! !

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Indira Babbellapati 03 October 2009

6000km is closeness, doc...you know what i mean...

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A . 01 October 2009

aray yeah kya aam logoon kee samagh may aana wali shairee ki han, lagta han kuch asar ho gya han... not of my comments but of ttttttt.. hehehe errrrr : P~

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Yasmin Khan 20 July 2013

Very ecstatic and emotive composition...how gallantly you've expressed your wish!

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Meena Mustafa 30 June 2012

Wow! Wow! Wow! beautiful composition.

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Chris Jibero 23 October 2010

Lovely.The heart is best place to live.Well done.

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Sahar Sahar 15 February 2010

beautiful romantic mood, i think you have done beautifully

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Reshma Ramesh 14 December 2009

beautiful.........in the mood doc?

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