Monday, January 17, 2011

Witness Ceased Existence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do we each one endure in a small world all our own?
Or are there other persons who really share our soul?
Epiphany is singular when crowded or alone
Yet we remain in endless doubt, -
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Helen Bauman
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2018

Congratulations on being chosen as the Member Poem of the Day! (last 29th of January 2018-Monday) A most beautiful poem to be pondered upon. I like very much this sheer honest atmosphere!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 January 2018

impediment and barrier to the progress of fellowship lies in selfishness...........great composition with great thought.......10

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Chinedu Dike 29 January 2018

A witty philosophical piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned with conviction. An insightful rendition set aside for serious reflection. Thanks for sharing Helen.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 January 2018

An unique thought-provoking poem. Helen, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Lyn Paul 29 January 2018

An excellent poem that is so thought provoking. Wonderful to read. A creation of words pieced together for us all to enjoy and wonder.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 January 2018

Human life remains in endless doubt. This is of course true. You have amazingly drafted this brilliant poem. We have to clarify doubts and trust on God. This is a nice poem chosen for the poem of the day. Congratulations! ...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2018

We seek to ponder! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 29 January 2018

Excellent poem. Well chosen words demanding to pay attention on our way of thinking. Congratulations on a great poem for member place.

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Siddartha Montik 29 January 2018

Nice Poem and with deep meaning(s) ! ! Aptly explains about the times we're living in! ! Congratulations for your being the Poem of the Day! ! 10++!

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James Mclain 29 January 2018

Helen, congratulations on your poem of the day

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Tom Allport 29 January 2018

a very interesting write of different worlds coexisting in the same time and space most just trying to get along? .......................well written Helen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 January 2018

Helen, such a brilliant poem of the day...congrats for being chosen... a huge 10++++

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