To fulfil immortality in life
Is woman's truth
Whose sole deed is
To disclose us to ourselves,
To whom next to Almighty
All owe their life
And who makes it worth having,
Although in the veil of desire
Is but lust made beauty,
Nature's agreeable blunders
In the magnifying glass of spite,
Yet no man is whole in himself
Save she's the rest of him.
What puzzles the mind,
Heart can understand only by love,
Awareness can touch only by virtue,
So rich in variety
Each perfect in its own line-
light of love alive, home in flesh,
Revered when alive,
Venerated when dead,
in her is the end of breeding.
To fulfil immortality in life Is woman's truth... Yet no man is whole in himself Save she's the rest of him.... Revered when alive, Venerated when dead, ... Beautiful expressions for woman
You lavish well merited praise on women. We are all born from women, hence your mention of, 'immortality in life'. I think you are partly right when you say, 'no man is whole in himself/ Save she's the rest of him' Like her being the 'better half' of a marriage. I think some men, though, manage to define themselves independent of women. A most stimulating poem.
A beautiful well written masterpiece...i love it. Thank you.
Very good format on your poem and very much enjoyed reading it.
An excellent tribute to women. Each and every stanza presents a wonderful attribute of a woman.So beautifully expressed. A must read for all especially women. Onto my Poem List.
Makes me very curious........I wished I could view the female fan club you've got! Women swooning over you! , , , , and I've been on another planet! What pleases me no end...... is that your happy!
In the veil of desire! ! ! Woman. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I much enjoy reading your work, this is a wonderful tribute to us women. TFS
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Enjoyed your poem, its imagery and cadence. The contrast between in and out could be stronger. However, I like it, good work.