Wringing Out A Tone... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Wringing Out A Tone...



Waiting I was this far,
Waiting for your call,
Waiting to hear you in my heart,
Waiting to be heard that bad;

The ringtone breaks the silence at last
You tell me you were busy fast;
You tell me you would again call
And hang up my dreams that have rung so far...

Busy? No; I know you are
Pretending busy, to dismiss me fast;
Busy not, to respond to the readiness
That rings so loud inside my heart...

Let me remain, let come your call;
But amidst memories raining hard,
Let me wring out the scorching pain
That soaks up heavy inside my heart...

April 10th 2009

Friday, April 10, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: april
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mona Martinez 01 June 2009

wow. that's lovely. thanks for sharing. :)

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Noha El3wdy 31 May 2009

somehow it seem so true. hope you hadnt lived this painy experience well done its really touchy

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Priyanka Bhowmick 31 May 2009

the pain of love when sumone ignores you... lovely composition..! !

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Ashley Ormon 30 April 2009

Very realistic poem. I feel as if it is something that I can relate too. After reading 'Caught! ' I see why you asked me to read this haha. Nice write once again.

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Akhila V 27 April 2009

good one! Also, the little things in a relationship that brings tears to our eyes are etched in our memories to cherish them later with a smile on our face.

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Santhi Janardanan 21 May 2024

Amazing!

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Rob Lamberton 07 March 2023

A distant calling that you can't hang up on!

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Jasmin Bell 07 December 2009

great emotion in this poem...loved it

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Melanise Brown 14 October 2009

I like how yo poem goes through like a story or video to a love song and i could see a clear picture... i liked the sensitivity, and how u explain the pain of someone waiting patiently for a call

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 August 2009

very emotional....sensitive and painful. ignorance is the worst disrespect one can pay to a sensitive heart. thank you sir, loved the poem.

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