Y..... Nature's Story Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... Nature's Story

Rating: 4.8


The early morning orange
Tells me a story of peace and being kind
But isn't it a bit strange
That peace and friends are hard to find

The static high casuarina tree
Tells me a story of tolerance and dignity
But why is it that I see
So much anger, hate, lack of integrity

The deep and tumultuous sea
Is telling me a story of strength and beauty
But somehow all around me
Garbage and dirt is everywhere to see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 04 August 2012

Maybe it's a nature where beauty surrounded with challenges, and love around the hates, and forgiving circled by hurting....but there's nothing to stop being good beautiful and nice....nature has taught us this, and like a rose, it keep the beauty and fragrance even it stand together with thorn, just give the best and it still worth to do it_Unwritten Soul

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Heather Wilson 04 August 2012

True friends are so rare to many of us, so much garbage and dirt as you say seems to be in abundance, guess it will never be a perfect world, a very thoughtful write.

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Valerie Dohren 04 August 2012

The world is indeed a beautiful place, but such a pity that it is so contaminated by mankind. Good one Aufie

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Spiritual Seeker 25 September 2012

Each person has a solemn duty to pretect nature! We are adviced to keep the balance of all things! Nice observation...a great 10.

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Sanjay Mehta 01 September 2012

So mother nature has so much in store but what is good we humans abhor. This is the harsh and painful reality. Nicely penned concerns..

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Joseph Anderson 20 August 2012

So sad that we dirty our beautiful world. This poem shows much care- good write

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Walterrean Salley 13 August 2012

We humans can certainly learn a lesson from nature. Very sad that the world is in such a sad state.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 August 2012

People have true friends, but it is only a few! The rest spoil the friendship by spoiling the trust! thought provoking poem!

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