A gentle rain
begins to fall
washing cares
of life away
clearing
darkened skies
from fragments
of yesterday
a new day has
dawned
looking for
tomorrow
releasing
saddened hearts
from yesterdays
sorrows.
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A real beauty..the past is always there to remind us of yesterday. Beautifully penned poem.
in my own opinion of the poem: a gentle rain begins to fall, a rain of hope, hope to wash away every past sorrow, and hope for better future, when a new day has dawned. its a soft, gentle poem, full of wit..its a 10 for me
A gentle rain begins to fall washing cares of life away clearing darkened skies from fragments of yesterday a new day has dawned looking for tomorrow releasing saddened hearts from yesterdays sorrow....................................excellent write, sweet, it has great meaning and good flow...love it 10...
There is a rare gentleness about all your writings! Like a sligt drizzle, it refreshes!
A short poem definitely with a strong msg that you have to move forward, forgetting the earlier sorrows- with a view to survive
Wonderful poem about moving on from yesterday's sorrows. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Phenomenal write. Love the intensity and word choices. :)
Will be any rain to clear my heart like the rain did to earth...then tears come but pain still not fade away_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great poem, sometimes a new day can be very welcoming, then we can say goodbye to a bad yesterday.