Your Smile Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Your Smile

Rating: 5.0


your smile holds me…
as the morning sunshine,
taking the world in its arms

your smile caresses me…
as the evening breeze
loitering along the seashore
to hug the leaping waves

your smile begins from the heart
and spreads across your face
like glittery ripples
sweeping over the river

in its warmth I melt
till I'm no more myself.

Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Friday, July 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 08 July 2017

Lovely. I wish the whole world had that kind of smile. I guess we all must do our part.

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Valsa George 07 July 2017

What a lovely poem....! The mesmerizing effect of a smile from someone whom you love. This smile seems to have the beauty and aroma of a smiling flower and the warmth and sweetness of a baby to its mother! 10+++++

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Muhammad Ali 07 July 2017

such smile such blessing, a beautiful poem.

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Ayman Parray 07 July 2017

What a beautiful poem. Must be a very lucky celebrity. You are one of the best poets ever I believe and nothing can change that belief.

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M Asim Nehal 19 July 2017

And this is the God's most precious gift to the mankind......A smile can lift and en-light anybody. It emanates from the heart and touches the heart, a crafty and inspiring poem, Love it..10+++++

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Wow! It reads even better the second time! Elegantly and excellently expressed!

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Added to my poem list. Thanks Nosheen!

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Simply sublime! Wow!

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Bharati Nayak 21 July 2017

your smile begins from the heart and spreads across your face like glittery ripples sweeping over the river in its warmth I melt till I'm no more myself. - - - - - - - - An absolutely lovely poem- - - - Love is viewed both in worldly and spiritual sense- - - - -It starts with individual but spreads to merge with universal as we can find love in nature - - in the sunshine, on the ripples of river water, evening breeze of sea shore and the individual melts into that warm feeling.

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Norah Tunney 21 July 2017

I want to dissolve into that smile Nosheen till I am no more. I love the picture you paint especially the second verse -the breeze loitering along the seashore. What a great word loitering especially in this context. So so uplifting! ! !

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