your smile holds me…
as the morning sunshine,
taking the world in its arms
your smile caresses me…
as the evening breeze
loitering along the seashore
to hug the leaping waves
your smile begins from the heart
and spreads across your face
like glittery ripples
sweeping over the river
in its warmth I melt
till I'm no more myself.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
What a lovely poem....! The mesmerizing effect of a smile from someone whom you love. This smile seems to have the beauty and aroma of a smiling flower and the warmth and sweetness of a baby to its mother! 10+++++
What a beautiful poem. Must be a very lucky celebrity. You are one of the best poets ever I believe and nothing can change that belief.
And this is the God's most precious gift to the mankind......A smile can lift and en-light anybody. It emanates from the heart and touches the heart, a crafty and inspiring poem, Love it..10+++++
Wow! It reads even better the second time! Elegantly and excellently expressed!
Added to my poem list. Thanks Nosheen!
your smile begins from the heart and spreads across your face like glittery ripples sweeping over the river in its warmth I melt till I'm no more myself. - - - - - - - - An absolutely lovely poem- - - - Love is viewed both in worldly and spiritual sense- - - - -It starts with individual but spreads to merge with universal as we can find love in nature - - in the sunshine, on the ripples of river water, evening breeze of sea shore and the individual melts into that warm feeling.
I want to dissolve into that smile Nosheen till I am no more. I love the picture you paint especially the second verse -the breeze loitering along the seashore. What a great word loitering especially in this context. So so uplifting! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely. I wish the whole world had that kind of smile. I guess we all must do our part.