You're Eyes Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

You're Eyes

Rating: 4.9


Your eyes are raindrops-
Transparent and simmering
Upon the half opened flowers;

They hide my heart inside
Their throbbing immensity;
I feel like in heaven,
In a trance and half asleep;

Your eyes are raindrops;
Enclosing the azure sky within
Their sharp outlines;
I like to remain a prisoner forever
Gripped by their mysticism.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 12 September 2023

Romanticism is not yet, dead, .God bless those who still feel and follow it. Above all else!

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Sandra Feldman 12 September 2023

Wonderful Poem! ! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 12 September 2023

Just beautiful Anil : ) Top marks*****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 September 2023

A beautiful poem... well penned dear poet

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Arastu Goyal 08 October 2023

Enjoyed reading this! Wonderful!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

Precious words loveliest worded, gorgeous poem, Anil Sir!

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 October 2023

Congratulations Anil on member poem of the day! Well done *****

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2023

I suggest PROOFREADING a poem 2-3 times BEFORE SUBMITTING aka 'publishing', AND ONCE AFTER it shows up on one's poem page. 'YOU'RE' IS....wrong. bri : )

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

THAT makes this poem so beautiful, Bri!

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