Zzzzzzzzzz... The Mermaid And The Sailor...Thanks Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Zzzzzzzzzz... The Mermaid And The Sailor...Thanks

Rating: 3.7


thanks for all who commented and thanks for who inspired me,

who let it be from Top 500 poems


thanks for that sailor who left his mermaid on that island while waiting under one tree..

thanks for who let my tears fall when harshly criticized me..

thanks for who felt me..............

what does matter is being able to reach you...to share you my

thoughts and my aching heart's beats..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Dreamer 05 July 2009

Dearest Tamara A little Gem AS always full of sparkle

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Noel Horlanda 06 July 2009

Don't mention it, you deserve it. I'd say again, you're a great poet and a writer rolled into one. Enjoy the glory.

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John Shea 06 July 2009

TaMaRa...Simple sweet and humbles one..You know?

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 July 2009

very tender...full of humility and gratefulness I love your writes.... you deserve it... words to melt our hearts.... lovelots, maia

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James Roberts 09 July 2009

A very unusual and somehow deeply moving poem I'll read some more of your work when I get the time jim

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John Knight 01 September 2009

Hi TAMARA - A very interesting poem. Is it a poem? (in the srtictest sense of the word) or what the French call UNE POESIE MERCI - 'A Thank You Poem'. We all love 'un message de merci' a thank-you letter so for that reason (I know I am on your thank you list) I have put a TEN in the box and improved the average to 8.2! What are you saying to us? THANK YOU...................... For all who commented and inspired (that should be the essence of Poemhunters) For that sailor (some of us have come back to the Island for you!) For who let my tears fall (we catch your tears!) For who felt me (all your friends feel for you - in sadness and joy!) Being able to reach and share - in your thoughts and aching heart beats That is the essence and d raison d'etre of all Poemhunter Friends Because we love your poems (and you) we will always be there for you commenting and voting. Thank you for your THANK YOUS - JOHN

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Faran Khalid 18 July 2009

You have to face all difficulties to achieve your aim and u done it congrats 10 pluss

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 13 July 2009

awwww...my dear friend thats really sweet. i think you touch a lot of people keep writing^^

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very interesting if you get the time please stop by my page and comment on some of my poems thank you have a nice day

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

a fine moving piece indeed! You are endowed with wisdom! 10+

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