2008 Olympic Games Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

2008 Olympic Games

Rating: 2.5


(dedicated to people who love sports)

citius
altius
fortius

fastest
highest
strongest

eight, eight, eight
Chinese culture
bring fortunate

Beijing, China
Bird's Nest Stadium
marvellous ceremony

fantastic fireworks
laser performances
80 countries' leaders

five Fuwa
dancing Beijing
one world, one dream

five interlocking rings
blue, black, yellow, red, green
America, Africa, Australia, Asia, Europe

sportivity
above
all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 21 May 2009

Not strictly Haiku but very similar..... very well constructed poem this. Well done. Ruthy

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Delicate Heart 08 May 2009

nice poem which takes the breath away with its delicacy...mine ten

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Subroto Chatterjee 02 May 2009

Sportivity for everthing else too......Olympic spirits shouldn't play every four years in sports only, my friend. But for ever in EVERTHING (yea, sounds like the impossible dream) . But no harm in dreaming and trying... Cheers. SUbroto

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Indira Renganathan 27 April 2009

An ever lasting contribution to Olympics...wonderful...I like the last stanza

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Les Derbyshire 21 March 2009

Interesting structure and choice of subject. Nicely put together.

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Kolawole Ajao 17 April 2010

I like sport and I like poem, and the two you have combined. Nice one, Ahmad.

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Joseph Vincent Orlanda 04 April 2010

a summary of the 2008 olympic games in such a few, detailed, vivid words...masterfully done.

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

citius altius fortius Rachel Ann Butler

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Surya . 06 June 2009

sports and fireworks.nice posted10 surya

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Kuji Soliman 04 June 2009

Breath taking, i loved it soooo much! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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