the sea was dust,
the dust was sea,
and both were sky
no one there
no one here
no one around
only the pens,
and this poet
lost in words
Short wordings and sweet poem with a rhyme..I gave a rating of 6/10...maybe you inser more paragraphs to make 12 stanza to form a sonnet.
I like it. I want contact u via my email
..i wish i could give you more than 10..but sadly that is the only limit here..
..the sea was dust.. ..the dust was sea..and both were sky.. ..these words made a chill run through my body.. ..words were few..but very very powerful..
I'm not quit sure but I really enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful, and has a certain innocence about it. It gives you a Brie into the poets solitude while he's writting. Very good!
yes; this is poetry and i am inspired; someday when i will be able enough; i will follow your footsteps! ! !
Yes this one is one of the best works of you dear. Very imagery and deep meaning. Fantastic and you deserve the best appreciation.
Thank you for inviting me to read this. I very much enjoy short and concise abstractions of this kind.
I like it. :) Very good.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
insightful enjoyed this poem good job