Friday, September 18, 2009

A Birth Day Wish*. Comments

Rating: 4.3

oh! wake up my lovely princess,
allow the sun to rise for you,
and sprinkle its golden rays,
with all its effulgence in, bright
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surya surya
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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Lovley poem, , , .amaazing write and a manificient poem

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Lady Grace 11 June 2010

how r u surya? ....add more....ur poems are nice...

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Iron Panda 23™ 28 April 2010

soooo awesomely beautiful! ! !

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Jessica Fay Harding 21 April 2010

A beautiful composition of vivid imagery to express what would have otherwise been a cliched versification. Well done Surya.

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Raj Nandy 01 April 2010

A BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY WISH EXPRESSED IN VERSE! -Raj

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Marieta Maglas 31 March 2010

wonderful lyric poem, thank you for sharing 10/10

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Rizwana Farheen 30 March 2010

I read you'r poem so sweet, i like it!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2010

spread joy and happiness for you, family and friends and let me hold your hands and wish a happy and joyful birthday! ..matter of joy and happiness for all members of the family...lovely occasion... i enjoyed compete them with words and contents..10 read mine... i miss.... anniversary....

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 March 2010

Flowery floral ornate…indeed genetically women love flowers most …and the décor by flower make captivating… beguiling enamor… Thanks Sir for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

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Sherif Monem 04 March 2010

Very lovely and colorful.

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Walterrean Salley 26 December 2009

a beautiful wish that anyone could appreciate. Thank you.

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Aekg Navrilith 26 October 2009

sorry i know i said i would read it on my birthday but i got really side tracked... but i'll pretend its my birthday so... WoW lovely i particually like the bit about the eyes. Thanks.

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Anusha Subramanian 06 October 2009

A beautiful poem, Lovely write......... Give it a 10....... :)

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 30 September 2009

A poetic sojourn with nature in BD Ten. dr.sakti Cordially invite to read the unread poems and post comment and or criticism.

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Abdul Athani 29 September 2009

fine fine lines good poem 10+++

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Rahul Sharma 27 September 2009

REMARKABLE EFFORT.......................LOVELY WRITE

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Eyan Desir 27 September 2009

Good write The flow wasnt the best But good for a 10

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 26 September 2009

Beautiful birthday wish..............Good poem

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 24 September 2009

a beautiful poem..best gift on a birthday..

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Obinna Eruchie 23 September 2009

Flowery with beautiful imagery.

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surya surya

surya surya

kozhikode, @chennai.india
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