Tia Maria

A Brand New Day

Uninvited thoughts, corrupt a verse
And poetry, you become a curse
Memory, you can be so unkind
Your constant ability, to remind

And radio, sometimes you don't belong
You are so cruel, it's very wrong
I decided to move on, today
But then that song, you had to play

And as for you, lousy weather
I suppose you think, you very clever
You knew my plan, to have some fun
But took away my friend, the sun

But like this season
Emotions are strange
Without any given reason
it will all just change

And Spring will surprise
and brighten away
All those unwanted thoughts
of a grey yesterday

And life will simply just, carry on
and take us to wherever we, belong
There may be a few clouds, along the way
But they will make way, for a brand new day

Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 12, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, July 12, 2008

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  • Henry Brown (7/18/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    Tia Maria Is that your real name? It is like your poem, it flows and it rhymes! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (6/11/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Bursting with beauty. Thanks for making my day.

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  • Junior Pocoloco (5/7/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    Your poem is fresh and natural. I know and have lived this poem. You have a fan here in California. Good day to you Raymond

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (3/22/2009 1:00:00 AM)

    There may be a few clouds, along the way
    But they will make way, for a brand new day.........wonderful lines........Show must go on..........10+++

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  • Anthony Pierre (2/25/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    This poem opened my eyes, really liked it, im only young but i hope to develop as good as that

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  • Luzaan De BruynLuzaan De Bruyn (1/6/2009 4:00:00 AM)

    i love this poem it is deep and is the reality

    i would appreciate it if you could read some of my poems

    my regards

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  • Amy Ludidi (12/1/2008 4:58:00 PM)

    very interesting rhyme scheme, loved the poem overall, well written
    tx 4 sharin
    word

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  • Meggie GultianoMeggie Gultiano (11/13/2008 4:53:00 AM)

    love the last two lines..I love the gentle flow of your words

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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (10/20/2008 7:22:00 PM)

    I did enjoy this one. Some thoughts there from deep experience. Hope you read mine: 'Memory is a Cheating Thing'
    Adeline

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  • Tj Becker (10/16/2008 7:11:00 AM)

    Loved the flow and rhyme. A really good read for me early in the morning.Tea and Tia a great combination; -)

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/20/2008 6:30:00 AM)

    Marvelous poem. Last stanza is amazing. A moving composition with magnificent metaphors,10 for it.

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  • Loyd C Taylor SrLoyd C Taylor Sr (9/10/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    Now this was a cheerful and delightful poem, great read! Loyd

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  • Kris Smith (8/27/2008 6:47:00 AM)

    Forward thinking in this piece of magic, yes a good write your future holds so much for you with this frame of mind, smiles ahead of yourself 10 Chris

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  • Ron Flowers (8/22/2008 11:02:00 PM)

    I love the optimistic message expressed here.

    Ron

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  • Tanya Stanford (8/15/2008 2:00:00 AM)

    Brialliant use of use to express emotions. One of my favorite poems I've read today. Love the use of rhyme and seasons. Lovely piece of work.10/10

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  • James B. Earley (7/21/2008 7:52:00 AM)

    An optimist......straight from the soul! Excellent.

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  • Bob Blackwell (7/13/2008 9:32:00 AM)

    An excellent poem your rhyming's quite superb. It is only our thoughts that interfere to spoil our day and make us feel unhappy. Bob

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (7/13/2008 5:47:00 AM)

    All those unwanted thoughts
    of a grey yesterday...........................

    even when wrought of time past
    yet it sings the song imortal ahead of time
    life when flows in the plexus in space and time
    still it croons by the new day to be emblazoned...............interesting imagery of the life across timeand we talk of those passion yet unexpressed depicting the desire intoned, excellent work,10+, thanks for sharing

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  • Kyle Shield Laster (7/12/2008 7:29:00 PM)

    inspirational.
    loved it! !

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  • Salil Sheth (7/12/2008 7:16:00 PM)

    Good poem. Keep writing!

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