Our love was destined to fail,
I tried to save it without avail,
For between us, you built a fence,
Leaving me weak without any defense...
You turned my heart into a fortress
Inhabited by a soul sad and hopeless
But time has done the healing,
Making me self-confident with new feelings...
In the Mighty One above,
I found fortitude, peace and love...
I got the courage to bury my past
And forgetting a love I failed to cast...
Clearly, you became a loser and sinner
While I became stronger and a winner...
Now, I stand on a solid ground,
Hoping for a real love to be found...
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what a glorious poem to make people hope for a better day and love :) so glad that i finally read this superb poem... i really needed it :) One day Father will come and do the same thing he did for but for me peace and love Romeo ~Bella
Wow! ! What a fantastic write....an emotional love poem which shows the defeat in love is not the end of world but you have to come out stronger as someone somewhere awaits you....
There is a fine unity of thought, skill and attitude surrounding life. I love the optimism and problem solving approach reflected in the poem. Marks 10
This poem is really a fantastic work of art. The faith in the One above is heling us really through all difficulties. I like very much the verses where you become stronger and the winner and the other one the loser. Very well written.10+
A lovely poem with with emotions & heart break but with a message that true love makes a person more and more strong... loved it
Now, I stand on a solid ground, hoping for a real love to be found. Looing toward the future.
i can see your words , your poem made me think of my first date, , , , , it did not go well...10
I must say, this masterpiece left me speechless. So beautiful, and out of mind thinking.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful poem with a wonderful rhyming scheme. Just like all your other poems it is miserable but ends up hopeful at the end, I adore it. Keep spirits up Romeo!