A Cavern Of Gold For The Noble Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Your rhymes lend an appealing musical flow to this well written piece. 10, for you. Sandra

yeah i can realy feel it, yeah rhymes pay a major role indeed..... that's what i can do.... i just write in free verse, i like your short and sweet, but refreshing ones, and those words speaks a lot too cheers 10++

fine poem, i like the rhyming scheme particularly (aaa...) thru out. Thanks for sharing.

kkoollllllll poem u goty here... one can feel the rhymin sounds... keep on writing peace

Beautiful, lovely, exceptional, clever Fantastic, amazing, a splendid endeavor I enjoyed every word, please continue to write your message is great, and really quite brite

I loved the flow of this piece. seems like you tossed it off easily which does not take away from its' content.

it is a great poem in all senses

short precise with a captivating rhym.I loved it.

I liked your rhyming pattern that you used in this poem

This a true poem in general, I mean in literal, in a poetic mind it is also true but a different description for me. And what was true to both is that one must be righteous to see the light.