A Cavern Of Gold For The Noble Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Oh what a most beautiful place to be. I could imagine this place as I read, it has a very calming effect on the reader as a soft sweet melody. Lovely

'If stealing is not their role, Danger is kept in control'....speaks the purport of the poem... otherwise sounds musical10

very imaginative and lovely voted10 surya

Lovely! Yes, a breeze can lift us high! Thanks for sharing.

I beg your pardon, that's not all right, I spelled that word wrong, the word is 'Bright'

I loved the flow of this piece. seems like you tossed it off easily which does not take away from its' content.

it is a great poem in all senses

short precise with a captivating rhym.I loved it.

I liked your rhyming pattern that you used in this poem

This a true poem in general, I mean in literal, in a poetic mind it is also true but a different description for me. And what was true to both is that one must be righteous to see the light.