a cloud came down
and spread over
it kept on coming
closer and closer
tranquility and reassurance
along with peace
which descended
A cloud descending on the ground representing peace has finally arrived in a place.
Clouds can be beautiful or ominous, here it brings peace and tranquility. Good thoughts and sentiment and speaks of what the world needs in brief.
It gave me a lovely feeling. If you have time try 'Shower.'
Brief poems are the best, this one says more with less. good use of imagery and word flow. thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice symbolistic poem, very well written.......10