A Diary Four (La Isla Samba) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Diary Four (La Isla Samba)

Rating: 2.7

(dedicated to Ms. Catrina Heart, a poet friend at poemhunter)

this early sensuous Summer
I wander together with her
a voice of seagull calls
the sea is shimmering

thou beautiful one! my heart's desire
you have changed me by your love
my soul yearns for your care
my arm resting upon yours

your love has captured me
your love holds me back
swan flies up and soars
the birds sing in flocks

Maria Barbara Korynt 18 February 2009

Your remaining love is splendid. This love is nothing imperturbable and bright. Very much I like this subtlety in your poems. I am greeting :)

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Fiona Davidson 16 February 2009

Another excellent dedication of a beautiful poem...thanks...10++

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Lynda Robson 16 February 2009

Nice poem for a nice person, 10 Lynda xx

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Bob Blackwell 15 February 2009

Well written truibute for a lovely lady.

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

nice poem for a good friend

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Michael Brock 06 May 2010

Your use of words is well done, very good flow and imagery, I like feel of this poem. It gives me a remembered feeling of young love... thanks for sharing Michael

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Surya . 24 June 2009

a lovely and wonderful poem.nice wording surya

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Indira Renganathan 29 March 2009

What a friendly dream...dream of a poem10

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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Ben Gieske 20 February 2009

A nice place by the sea to visualize and contemplate. Helps beautify your thoughts of love. All the s words in the first stanze help create the right mood. Good writing.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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