A Dry Plant Poem by Tareq Jalabi

A Dry Plant

Rating: 4.8


my soul is distressed
my heart is ill
love must be confessed
and i love her still
no way to conquer that disease
her love i cannot kill
coz loving her my heart won't cease
it is against his will
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no matter how much i try
her love to me is the sky
and i am that guy
which without it will die
she didn't feel sigh
for letting me cry
till I - the plant
became dry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alecia Nak 13 September 2009

this poem is like true to the heart it's like this was written from the soul; wonderful and perfectly written.

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Surya . 27 August 2009

vow! great love.love poem.keep it up. voted10 surya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

A beautiful poem, lovely write.

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beautiful, blue eyes, but you should not write about love anymore...

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Grezlay Figueroa 21 March 2009

greatly written and expressed. id like to see more =)

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 22 November 2009

Hi, sad poem, it touches deep inside of me. t had hapened to me. it was so hard. Keep on, you're a good composer!

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Rachael Miroddi 20 November 2009

The title of this poem really attracted to me to it, and went with the poem perfectly. I would not even think to change that! Great job!

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

heart touching and a very interesting, very emotional poem! ! !

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Indira Renganathan 15 September 2009

Why should you become a dry plant waiting in wasted days...too emotional...love is such...nice to read

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 15 September 2009

A true love comes from within, and it clearly stated here. Nice delivery of the lines helps the poem to be more enjoyable to read... Keep it up.. I rated you 9.

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