They say:
'you snooze, you lose'
and it's said like a truth I should keep
but the uncouth answer I choose
Is at least you don't lose sleep!
Top maks for the title, the endless chuckle, and the dose of reality...spot on! Jack.
haha. nice rebuttal! & uncouth is a great word. to use in a poem. i dug.
Ah, the loser rationalizes! I completely concur! And great title! -Linda
Great stuff. I'm a wake up to this sort of thing although tired of some of those contradictory disposable platitudes. Well done.
I like, I like. Niffty thought. Read mine - Clowns - Adeline
I would guess that U'd not want to take a sleeping pill, or U'd lose te will. Great write Sir Chuck. God bless the sleepy ones-MJG.
Hear Hear! ! (and with a little one in tow - I totally get this one!) HG: -) xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
10 for making me laugh out loud. solid.