Dave Alan Walker

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A Ghost That Can'T Let Go - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Sleeping in daylight
too scared to sleep at night
there's voices in my head
from people who are dead

They say that they
want to talk to me
to tell me about the past

But I don't
want to talk to them
because I know
I died with them that night

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Comments about A Ghost That Can'T Let Go by Dave Alan Walker

  • Aries Profanisaurus (3/21/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    Very interesting, makes a reader want to know more. Mysterious and enjoyable (Report) Reply

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  • (11/14/2013 4:20:00 PM)

    wow, a fine poem that reminds me of me.thank mon. (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (11/8/2013 1:20:00 AM)

    A mysterious poem you wrote... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden (11/6/2013 7:02:00 PM)

    Hello Dave A very interesting poem We all want to know what happened that night. Very enjoyable read (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2013 7:47:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this one Dave! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Lacovara (11/5/2013 7:52:00 PM)

    I consider the spirits of those who passed as old friends, their visits, be them in dreams, familiar voices, or just a presence, felt...welcomed and not to be feared....rather embraced...listen to the whispers of your life. Is there pain attached to the departed? Well written and lingering....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    Conscience always rings our mind, talking to us about the dead past! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (10/16/2013 5:33:00 PM)

    go ahead talk with them. they won't hurt you. they are just in another dimension a good write (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (10/12/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Listen just once.. You may be surprised, ...Just what did happen that night? (Report) Reply

  • Daniela Cesta (10/10/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    beautiful but have no fear of the dead
    death is only a change of worlds...
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  • Daniela Cesta (10/10/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    all welldone dear Dave (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    there is too much in this short peice. very good write (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (10/4/2013 10:29:00 AM)

    An eerie atmosphere is created successfully10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (10/1/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    Ghosts of the past so often do haunt us. Good one Dave. (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2013 1:57:00 AM)

    with every death of our beloved ones, a part of us is lost.
    great philosophy in this poem, Dave.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (9/30/2013 9:28:00 PM)

    what is an age my dear poet? what is death? you have put so many questions here in this poem. congratulation, very fine write. please read my poems and comment. especially'Family members' and vote. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/30/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    Past keeps haunting. It's better to feel dead than listen to the ghosts. Beautifully said. Thank you Dave. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/30/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    Yikes a nice hallucinating poem. Kudos to yor poem, im scared of d thot of them.
    Do read my latest on d jealous, coments aint necesary.
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  • Heather Wilkins (9/29/2013 9:21:00 PM)

    a good write Dave. I would not want to talk with them either. (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (9/29/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    I died with them that night......great. This is deep. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 4, 2015

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