A Good Poetry Before You Poem by Obed dela Cruz

A Good Poetry Before You

Rating: 5.0


Your words shall and will never flatter.
Instead of weakness You give power.
Your eyes will ever shine so brightly.
All that I see pays You courtesy.
All of the things You want, You maintain.
May You be pleased and let I remain
As a good poetry before You.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 27 October 2009

flashes of expressive verses. remind me of Emily Dickinson's.

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Moonbee Canady 27 October 2009

Hello Obed (You have a Beautiful Bible Name) Great Poem, this one... and yes, that is something to hope for... That our words, before God, should please Him... God Bless You, Kiddo... MoonBee

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Anju Addanki 28 October 2009

A very expressive one. well done.

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Paul Henry Dallaire 01 November 2009

My style of writing and very down to earth message -A-

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John Tiong Chunghoo 05 November 2009

love it Obed.Keep on writing.

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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

You'll be my friend, remain as a good poetry before us!

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Afzal Shauq 01 October 2010

sweet and well done..the poems you added are good and meaningful too in your young age. I appreciate your talent and say.. just keeping penning and never stop writing..you are doing very well..your poem deserves 10/10

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Queeny Gona 02 June 2010

Your words shall and will never flatter Wonderfull line obed,

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Kesav Easwaran 21 May 2010

very good lines Obed...you convey your message very poetically...10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 April 2010

‘Your words shall and will never flatter. /Instead of weakness You give power….’ A Big and Tall yeah …prudent lines Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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