A Government Graveyard Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A Government Graveyard

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Gathered in the graveyards
waiting for our own deaths
recesses called graves
waiting to take us

It's the life that poverty gave to us
the life the government
won't help us to get out of

Maybe it's time for a new hope
and a new government

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Thought provoking... enlightens the mind!

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The grave - such a wonderful place No tax men or gangsters come calling Even If they do, they leave in such a haste Absolute peace be it sunny or snow falling The grave, the grave oh such a wonderful place..... (Good short poem sir - welcome to my page too)

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Valerie Dohren 19 October 2013

I've just about given up on hope Dave, and as for a new government - they're all the same, aren't they? !

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Shahzia Batool 17 October 2013

This poem is applicable to many governments in many countries...what should i call it? a mild satire, or a wild one? but it is true!

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Wahab Abdul 17 October 2013

''the life the government won't help us to get out of'' these two lines give me another meaning....i love it what i understood by reading the two lines.....love your poem 10 marks..

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Brian Jani 19 June 2014

Yah i am inclined to agree with you, its very true and your poem is short yet it has pages of meaning

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Stephen W 20 December 2013

@Joe Breunig: rather naive, sir. The rich grow fat on government contracts. The condition of the poor depends on the attitude government takes. They trot out lots of lies To praise free enterprise. But all they really do Is steal from me and you. They give the state the blame, A rich rogue's lying game. No end to their demands When power's in their hands. The taxman grabs our dosh And gives it to the posh, Through contracts that are bent. We wonder where it went.

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Ramesh Rai 28 October 2013

Friend! you are right. a very realistic poem. It's the life that poverty gave to us the life the government won't help us to get out of

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 October 2013

A hardhitting poetic political riot against d govt. Yor poem is great indeed n true. Pls do chk out my latest poem.

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David Wood 26 October 2013

Out of the frying pan into the fire springs to mind. We in the UK do not seem to have politicians who are capable of running our country for anything other than their own aims and ambitions.

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