A Gun, A Man And Rights For New Brand Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Very nice write. the guns, the kings of the humanity killing, they should be stopped to not take any other lives anymore. love this write pal keep up writing about humanity.

There is a saying in bible that one who uses sword to kill, will get end his life by a sword. so is the case of guns. More than the first few stanzas the last ones are better in rhythm and rhyme. Please read poems of Robert Frost more. It will help to come up.

The Tuscon shooting, the Columbus killings, The Colorado theater, Sandy Hook, inner city violence all of this is caused because of an outdated constitutional amendment that's the legal equivalent wisdom teeth a feature not needed. Im not American so I cannot understand the obsession with owning a firearms, all I see is the trail of violence that's led from it. If you measure freedom with owning a gun, your only free to pick your grave. Good write

Have a look at my 'Gun Stupidity' poems Adheez.

That is cultural in some Countries. Perhaps a disarmament campaign? ? ?

Everyone is lying this poem is drivel. It flows like set concrete with imagry like in color.

A nice poem with the human folly it is truth and you gave a nice message we must try for such..thanks

You make some good points in your poem. The old adage - the pen is mightier than the sword is true especially in poetry. Although I'm a gun owner, learned how to shoot as a girl scout and was taught all the safety rules. Love target practice and have never shot anyone. Taught my sons how to shoot also. Guns don't kill people - people kill people. A gun can't shoot anyone unless a person pulls the trigger. Am an advocate for gun rights and stand behind the NRA completely. Have control over my weapons, and sons never took any of them unless we were with them. Because they were taught how to shoot and be safe they were never curious about them and never showed them off to anyone. It's all about education, ethics and morals. I respect your opinion and agree to disagree. Thank you for allowing me to read your poetry. RoseAnn

hi, this really a good poem, i don't think you write in bahasa and translate all in english, it won't hv good rhyme. i like this poem, the lines are beautiful with deep meaning. You have suceed capture the theme, overall poem indeed lovely. not many ppl realize pen can killed more ppl than gun... thanks for sharing

yeah! right! i really prefer these kinds of poems...this poem shows your care about human being...good luck adheez! :)