sea, makes me become a wanderer
like the wind
crossed the doubt and the hope
then lay for a seconds
to enjoy the silence
sea, makes me become a fighter
like a rock
crashing, day and night
still silent, of course keep survive
though full of wounds and holes
sea, makes me become a hermit
like the wave
came and repeated
there's always room
there's always less
sea, where I become a man
met the meaning of creation
so, I can guide the other me
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a good poem about the sea. sea, where I became a man met the meaning of creation so I can guide the other me.
Such a beautiful poem about the sea! Watching the waves is like communicating with a living thing. It tells us so much about ourselves and inspires us to become more than we are.
Restless as the sea which is untamed yet orderly with ebbs and flows. A nice poem
Excellent imagery, the sea is in a constant state of flux, as are we.
You know I was just thinking about the sea when I came across your poem. Very good poem. Bien!
nature a great teacher indeed, be with and then you be...lovely wonderful thanks
A very beautiful poem with excellent imagery. Vast sea connects us with our other half! So apt.
This is most beautiful - you've perfected the imagery
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this one I like... and I've never been to the sea before.