A Healing Kiss Poem by Valsa George

A Healing Kiss

Rating: 4.9


Bearing a crown of thorns
Someone planted a kiss
Scarring my face, the spikes
Pricked deep, letting
A stream of blood down

But,

Like a gush of summer rain
It cooled my smouldering spirits
Slumbered my frayed nerves
And loosened my taut muscles!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The tragedy and the irony well blended so as to sound phenomenal........Valsa......the rarest of rare poems I have ever read..........great piece from a great writer...........

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2014

The love behind painful words, sometimes becomes a pleasantry. That is how I understood your poem. It's a lovely poem. Well deserved rating of number 10.

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan 24 June 2014

I got the picture of Jesus on the cross? is that what you too had in mind, Ma'am? truly amazing

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Padmanabhan Ananth 04 January 2014

Wow, so well written, short but sweet.

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Amitava Sur 21 October 2013

The love's petals were sprinkled on you with a delicate kiss........ very nice

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 December 2019

He that wears a crown of thorns often suffers that others not, and when he tried to kiss, no wonder, it provided a soothing balm. A lovely short poem

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Anjandev Roy 23 November 2019

Like a gush of summer rain.......significant. anjandev roy.

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Indira Renganathan 09 March 2019

Very emotional words...pain and pleasure are always inseparable..no exception with love too...a poem that deserves a whole 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

There is love behind pain. It has been so nicely delineated in this poem. I quote....... Like a gush of summer rain It cooled my smouldering spirits Slumbered my frayed nerves And loosened my taut muscles! A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2017

A stream of blood down. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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