In my desperate need
To know of your whereabouts,
I asked the moon about you
And it turned its back on me, ,
Trying to hide behind a cloud...
I also asked the stars
With no response at all...
I had no choice, indeed,
But ask for help from above,
Since, witnesses they were both
Of our passionate love...
Now, stuck with inquire without result,
I am alone, sad and really hurt,
Making everything sounds like a satire,
Getting old and tired...
One question remaining,
Should I give up
Love's matters
And retire?
Her, and the whole world
Have the response...
COPY WRITE©2009
Sweet, a blessed read indeed.. it was touching for me personally cause it kind of outlined the very situation i am in right now... so thank you it was very nice.10+
this is a wonderful poem nice work keep the hard work up love tears us all apart but few how can get over anything remains, and i'm not one of them i gave you 10 i really like it
wow..well done i really like it.love is so DESIREable i mean its so passionate. it leaves you breathless..
‘…Should I give up // Love's matters // And retire? …’ No never because thro’ no answer is a kind of answer…LOVE is undying... Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK
This is a touching piece in which one seeks an answer to the loss of love. Nice piece!
Should I give up nice sad confessional surrealistic poem, very well written 10++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deep desires painted with passion....