A New Day Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

A New Day

Rating: 4.3


I bid adieu
to a long hard night,
at last,
to see a new day.
I could sense the glimmer of hope
in the awakening of sun,
rising with him
the spirit of my heart,
to fight another day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 31 January 2009

This was not too long and there were no wasted words. It was clear and meaningful. A nice perspective presented well. GW62

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Tom Golding 26 January 2009

Well done indeed, new hope for a fresh start.

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Vernon Eaker 24 January 2009

Very well done, excellent,

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Lynda Robson 23 January 2009

A new day, a new start, good write from you Vaibhav 10 Lynda xx

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Randy Hogan 22 January 2009

wonderful poem of hope...well writing....10

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Ritty Patnaik 16 November 2009

each day is a beginning of a new journey....to be accomplished and put behind.nice poem vaibhav, i really enjoyed reading it. ritty

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Aditi Singh 01 July 2009

simplified...yet meaningfull.......

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Susan Bagley 22 April 2009

Always this has been a theme of sincere poets. How it is a perfect simile of hope and faith. Well done. Do not shy away from happy and hopeful themes even in the midst of horror and despair. there is always hope as long as mankind has a glimmer of humanity left. Regards, Susan

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Mark R Slaughter 18 March 2009

A never-ending cycle for night workers Vaibhav! Very nicely written Mark

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Meggie Gultiano 01 February 2009

you've done a good job here, my friend..You are talented

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