A New Life (Frances/Aufie) Poem by Aufie Zophy

A New Life (Frances/Aufie)

Rating: 2.8


Having lived on the leaves of a single tree
Donny caterpillar was having a miraculous day
He was namely becoming a butterfly, you see?
And not just anywhere: he was born in the USA

From a twig hung the half empty cocoon
As the tiny life struggled to emerge all shy
Gone were his greedy leaf eating days
Donny unfolded his wings, ready to fly

He flew and saw a being with an orange face;
it was making a loud and thunderous noise.
The creature actually belonged to the human race.
Donny will not easily forget such an awful voice.

Then the man disappeared as if eaten by the screen
And an amazing field of poppies suddenly appeared
Where a lady lay smiling blowing bubbles in the air
Donny flew against the glass wishing he was there

Images on screen were changing, furious and fast.
So many things came on, even news with a twist;
it made Donny dizzy, because nothing would last
Soon he was on the couch of a butterfly psychologist

Dr Bloom took one look at poor Donny
You've been bamboozled by very bad TV
The prognosis is rather a natural one
Meet some like minded bugs and go have fun

With Dr. Bloom's advice to stay far from TVs
Donny got up from the couch and flew away
Back to the fields, the flowers and the trees:
With his friends continuing his first butterfly-day

You'll find Donny blissfully happy
Flying around in perfect health
Life is sometimes not a bed of roses
So choose a place you can be yourself

Saturday, February 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,life,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just less then a week ago Sister Frances (a poet very much worth reading, please visit her page) , got the great idea to write a poem together. I started the first stanza and then we alternated stanzas, Frances writing the final one. Please enjoy. The process of writing it, was great, surprising and fun.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 11 February 2017

So it's a joint venture, output of two poetic brains, wish I could know the stanzas written by you and those written by Sister Frances.

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Sister Frances 11 February 2017

We alternated, he started and I finished :) Thanks so much for reading it was a lovely experience :)

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Unwritten Soul 12 February 2017

A beautiful mixture of pallette, a combined artistry idea! so colourful

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Valsa George 12 February 2017

Great collaboration! Enjoyed the beautiful story with a moral!

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Sylvaonyema Uba 11 February 2017

Life is sometimes not a bed of roses. True expression! Sylva

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 March 2019

Not just anywhere! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 February 2017

Wow very creatively thought up poem. Yeah too much TV is not good for human or bugs eh. I enjoyed how u described the emergence of the butterfly. Great collaboration poets. Kudos for the rhyming as well. Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest.

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Susan Williams 18 February 2017

I enjoyed this romp! I am pleased it didn't turn purely political- - -certain names are already getting way too much press anyway! We would live a more healthy life if we stayed away from the trivial and the angry on the screen! Great job, you two!

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Muhammad Ali 18 February 2017

yes it is interesting. nice to read the work of two.

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Annette Aitken 16 February 2017

A great wee story and i love that the butterufly has a name (Donny) that adds the humour to it.

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