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A Soldier To America.

Rating: 4.8

I HEAR CRY'S FOR HELP
AND BOMBS EXPLODE,
BUT IM SO FAR AWAY FROM HOME,
AMERICA I STAND HERE ALONE,
FIGHTING FOR PEACE
BUT SO FAR AWAY FROM HOME,
AMERICA I STAND WITH A GUN IN MY HAND,
FIGHTING FOR FREEDOM
WITH OUT A PLAN,
AMERICA DO YOU REALLY NEED ANOTHER WAR,
IM JUST A SOLDIER THAT COULDNT TAKE NO MORE...

7/28/09

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Moorcroft 14 August 2009

I really like this short and to the point.10

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Not A Dream Choice 14 August 2009

political in some way..............................

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syaz wafea 26 August 2009

simple and nice erm..political? dnt u thnk dis is wut we need now? ? spreading d love peace for u~

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warner treuter 22 August 2009

Whatever, if you're a soldier we need and appreciate you. If you're a soldier, you must be young; I envy you. Poetry is a saving grace, isn't it? Just being a bit rhetorical but seriously truthful. May God be with you, always

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Nic Leisure 20 August 2009

wow so deep i gave you a 10....

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Bob Blackwell 15 August 2009

Jose, I agree with what you have written, every word and every verse. Read my poem 'Only Whispers' and you'll see I do agree. Well done 10+++ B ob

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Luwi Habte 14 August 2009

Jose, this is short and explanated too but political.. Nice at all Luwi

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