A Story Untold Poem by Bonnie Collins
A Story Untold
Stollen moments in the night as
the kaddie dids were singing
We danced to their music
Darkness and yet a slight hue of light
that casted a slight shadow on your face
Singing love spoken words, and kisses
inbetween, is where we shared our
afterhours, even the park bench had
our names engraved in a heart
Looking at each others eyes we knew
we could feel beneath all that kindered
our souls, we both knew commodities this
valuable would only be in our dreams
Possessing each others feelings, we
needed no longer to explain, a vision, no
it was one soul blended from two hearts
Love after the loving always seems to
become complicated, there are too
many obsticles to get distracted from
Rather than rationalize the importance
of what mistakes each of us would regret
for a lifetime, seemed rather non existant
Like a story with a beginning, and a middle
there was no ending, nor will there ever be,
maybe this is what eternal love means like
a story untold.........
Bonnie, This is a poetic feast for the mind, heart, & soul - your poems are always fresh & alive... thanks for sharing your uncompromising talent with us! Best regards, Robert
I'd change the name of this piece to A Story Told as you told it spectacularly! **10** Be Well, Nate
its a very nice poem..words chosen very articulately..keep writing! !
The story of love goes on, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10
And isn't love just wonderful. I did enjoy your story and hope that your love never does end. Irene
'Love after the loving always seems to become complicated, there are too many obsticles to get distracted from' A very beautiful poem. The last stanza is excellent. My love for it with 10.
a story untold...a love story very well you unfold...good piece 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 11:28:02 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful wonderful piece you have here. So wonderfully told a story of love.