Time eternal, time translucent of light
Time in our hands
Who would believe
That we were once borne in a lifetime
All by itself and the many generations
That came after..
Time eternal as they say
Yes..there is always a time for us
But memories however vague
Still color our world of make believe
Reminiscent of an era not so long ago
Taken by light as another dimension
The wherefores, and henceforth
Man so solid in light
A time for us..time as you guessed
It is in our hands
Whether you open it
To welcome opportunities
Or when you close it to finalize matters
To stand and corrected
And be at peace with God.
VERY WELL EXPRESSED...TIME IN OUR HANDS WE GIVE IT ALL SHADES AND LOSE IT'S ORIGINAL...LOVELY POEM ON A LOVELY SUBJECT.....10
Yes..there is always a time for us But memories however vague Still color our world of make believe Reminiscent of an era not so long ago Taken by light as another dimension The wherefores, and henceforth Man so solid in light ------- Like the classic music box song a time for us...true and well said my friend...couldnt say more...huhuhu I have to accept there is a time for us all...10+++
The hurriedness and possessiveness of time is well illuminated in this poem yielding some useful thoughts. Time is priceless and one cannot own it rather use it with splendor. Life is all about timing and every wise moment elapsed can bring about bright changes in one's life with unattainable becomes attain- -able and unbelievable becomes believeable. Another facet of the poem explains the misconception of time that it changes things but you have conceptualized it otherwise and conveyed this inspirational message that it is not time though it is precious that changes the fate, it is our own wisdom and truthfulness that bring about the changes.....
A timeless poem written with insight and intelligence. It's only as you age that you appreciate the preciousness of each minute. When we were young, life seemed eternal. These days, each new day must be accepted is a gift from God. Your final stanza is particularly eloquent. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This is an interesting piece of writing, time being such a complex thing. Each day a new gift for us to explore, and hopefully use well. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Irene *hug*
Man is finite even life on this earth giving one's best got to do it right in the eyes of God everyone has the chance!
I'm In awe of your divine beauty Your poetry sweep me away I'm so bless with you as a friend I love it 10++++++++++++++++++++
Yes there is a time for us...a time such as this. I feel your heart beat in these words. Time never stands still yet there is a time for us. Well done Meggie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Time is precious, like water! A successful man is when you know how to manage your time.