A Trickle Of Thought- 12 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thought- 12

Rating: 4.7


To liberate ourselves
From being slaves
Of our dark
And wicked thoughts
Is like flying
To heavens above.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Thursday, September 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 September 2020

A well penned poem. Beautifully conveyed and simply impressive..5 stars+++

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Savita Tyagi 24 September 2020

Excellent thoughts. So well arranged. These trickling thoughts are truly inspired ones in wisdom and thoughtfulness.

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Yes, its a bliss to get rid of our wicked thoughts

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2020

Liberation! ! ! Musing along, Freedom. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2020

To liberate we have to be changed by inner world It's a time It's a time to change own-self to change into good it's not for woman alone but for man it's not for black alone but for white it's not for east alone but for west it's not for third world alone but for first world it's not for ruled subjects alone but for rulers it's time, good time to change own-self to change everyone into good

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Rob Lamberton 01 March 2023

May we fly ever so quickly!

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2020

Inspiring poem, though difficult but not impossible.10***

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Akhtar Jawad 04 October 2020

Yes, we can't completely get of dark thoughts, after all we are human beings.

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Shaun Cronick 03 October 2020

Just simply revisiting a poem that is a class act and so worthy of a reread. Thank you Rose Marie and another worthy five stars. Take care and I wish you well.

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Anjandev Roy 29 September 2020

Another great write......thanks for sharing.....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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