Many years before
They had made a pact
On a Tuesday in June
That should they
Both be alone
On this particular Tuesday in June
They would meet
At the same Antique store
As she walked through the doorway
She was pleasantly surprised
To find
An antique...
Very much to her liking
Dee Daffodil (HW) 25 January,2007
Dee, I really loved this one and the seductive humour in it. Made me smile. I think I'm a fossil not an antique. Great write. Thanks for sharing it. David
xlent. really enjoyed reading this. loved the ending. gona keep it.
Hi Dee. I used to collect antiques but I dont think they were the same kind. a good read thanks. Regards Dave T.
Wrap it up. .I'll take it! Loved the story of it and the wonderful writing of it...grow old along with me the best is yet to be...lovely poem with just the right amount...a pinch of cutness and just enough matureness to add flavour to the words. i love it! love Dee Dee(Wright...that's right!)
most reveling to the spirit of love protracting, let my raved up feelings retreat into its own fold left behind carring this piece for a semblance smooching, well penned, i do adore admire
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, this is cute, but not too cute. Warmly sentimental, and so down to earth. Nice work.