A Tuesday In June Poem by Dee Daffodil

A Tuesday In June

Rating: 4.8

Many years before
They had made a pact
On a Tuesday in June
That should they
Both be alone
On this particular Tuesday in June
They would meet
At the same Antique store

As she walked through the doorway
She was pleasantly surprised
To find
An antique...
Very much to her liking

Dee Daffodil (HW) 25 January,2007

Not a member No 4 26 January 2007

Dee, you are surely much too young to be writing funny tales like this. Thank you for the laugh! ! xx jim

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Alison Cassidy 26 January 2007

Dee - this is very sweet and penned with warmth and gentle humour. Love it. Allie xxxx

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Barry Van Allen 27 January 2007

Dee, I never liked that ... about taking skin off of cats! but, there is more than one way to be naughty!

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Melvina Germain 28 January 2007

Excellent Dee, a slight bit of humour, I like that.---Melvina---

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Original Unknown Girl 30 January 2007

mmm... antiques.... a little dusty but once you give them a good polish, so much beauty! ! Great write - I like this a lot! HG: -) xx

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Pamela Lutwyche 10 October 2008

It made me think for a while. Then I got it, good poem

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David Threadgold 27 September 2008

Hi Dee. I used to collect antiques but I dont think they were the same kind. a good read thanks. Regards Dave T.

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O Anna Niemus 06 August 2008

one wonders if the antique was an object or your friend ..!

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Dee Dee Wright 30 December 2007

Wrap it up. .I'll take it! Loved the story of it and the wonderful writing of it...grow old along with me the best is yet to be...lovely poem with just the right amount...a pinch of cutness and just enough matureness to add flavour to the words. i love it! love Dee Dee(Wright...that's right!)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 July 2007

most reveling to the spirit of love protracting, let my raved up feelings retreat into its own fold left behind carring this piece for a semblance smooching, well penned, i do adore admire

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