Thursday, January 25, 2007

A Tuesday In June

Rating: 4.8
Many years before
They had made a pact
On a Tuesday in June
That should they
Both be alone
On this particular Tuesday in June
They would meet
At the same Antique store

As she walked through the doorway
She was pleasantly surprised
To find
An antique...
Very much to her liking

Dee Daffodil (HW) 25 January,2007
Dee Daffodil
Pamela Lutwyche 10 October 2008
It made me think for a while. Then I got it, good poem
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David Threadgold 27 September 2008
Hi Dee. I used to collect antiques but I dont think they were the same kind. a good read thanks. Regards Dave T.
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O Anna Niemus 06 August 2008
one wonders if the antique was an object or your friend ..!
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Dee Dee Wright 30 December 2007
Wrap it up. .I'll take it! Loved the story of it and the wonderful writing of it...grow old along with me the best is yet to be...lovely poem with just the right amount...a pinch of cutness and just enough matureness to add flavour to the words. i love it! love Dee Dee(Wright...that's right!)
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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 July 2007
most reveling to the spirit of love protracting, let my raved up feelings retreat into its own fold left behind carring this piece for a semblance smooching, well penned, i do adore admire
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Chris Mendros 01 June 2007
Yes, this is cute, but not too cute. Warmly sentimental, and so down to earth. Nice work.
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David Harris 10 March 2007
Dee, I really loved this one and the seductive humour in it. Made me smile. I think I'm a fossil not an antique. Great write. Thanks for sharing it. David
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Chuck Audette 08 February 2007
Loved this one, made me smile. -chuck
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alice sunderland 06 February 2007
xlent. really enjoyed reading this. loved the ending. gona keep it.
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Anna Russell 05 February 2007
Hee hee! Good one Dee :) Hugs Anna xxx
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